TRANSCRIPT: Opening: Welcome back to Messy Minutes: Assessment Edition! I’m your host, Shannon Schinkel, from the Embrace the Messy Podcast. Over the past four episodes, we’ve unpacked backward design, explored standards, and crafted criteria that are both task-neutral and detailed. Now, we need To boldly build criteria where no one has gone before. Hyperbole aside, we need to take those to the next level by refining them to be student-centered and accessible. It’s good, but how can we make it great? ________________________________________ Here’s the Issue: 1) Writing criteria in third person—“Students will be able to…” can feel teacher-centric, even when task-neutral and strength-based. True it is our responsibility to assess students and use our professional judgment, but what if we shifted to first-person language? Could this small change help students take a more active role in assessment, build confidence, and foster ownership of their learning? What if we thought about criteria not just as something the teacher uses only but something that invites students into the process, which could help them move from compliance to authentic engagement. What if first person language helps students see the purpose and relevance of their learning. 2) What if we make sure our criteria is accessible, meaningful and clear to not just us but our students– couldn’t that bridge some of the gaps that even the most thoughtfully written criteria leaves? When looking at criteria, students often ask, “What does this mean?” or “I get that you have expectations, but what do I actually need to do?”—questions we can address with clear, actionable language like “This means that…” It translates criteria into steps that guide students toward standards with confidence and clarity. ________________________________________ Let’s revisit our Hiking 101 course and the standard: “Apply appropriate strategies and tools to complete a hike, ensuring safety, pacing, and environmental awareness.” We’ve already crafted criteria for four levels of proficiency. Now, we’re adding some clarifying “this means that” language. Then we’ll put it all into first-person language. I’m going to work through this slowly so you can follow along. ________________________________________ Level 1: Before we get started, imagine a student at the very beginning of their journey. They’re just starting to figure things out and may feel a little unsure along the way. Previously we had: “Is in the beginning stages of identifying and attempting to apply strategies and tools for safety, pacing, and environmental awareness, and is working towards demonstrating understanding and consistency.” Now answer, what do you mean? – what does attempting and beginning stages look like? How will a student know they are there? This means that the student is figuring out which strategies and tools to use and may need help to adjust them during the hike. The result is that the student can complete the hike but may feel unsure or need to stop and rethink their approach along the way. Change it to first person: “I am in the beginning stages of identifying and attempting to apply strategies and tools for safety, pacing, and environmental awareness, and working towards demonstrating understanding and consistency. This means that I am figuring out which strategies and tools to use, and I may need help to adjust them during the hike. The result is that I can complete the hike, but I may feel unsure or need to stop and rethink my approach along the way.” ________________________________________ Level 2: Next, let’s picture a student who is starting to get the hang of it. They’re making progress but still figuring out how to handle unexpected challenges. Previously we had: “Applies some strategies and tools for safety, pacing, and environmental awareness with limited success, while continuing to work through challenges they are having in understanding and consistency.” Now answer, what do you mean? – what does limited success and working through challenges look like? This means that the student can use some strategies and tools on their own but may still need to make adjustments during the hike. The result is that the student is able to handle some challenges but might not feel fully prepared or confident in every situation. Change it to first person: “I can apply some strategies and tools for safety, pacing, and environmental awareness with limited success, while continuing to work through challenges I am having in understanding and consistency. This means that I can use some strategies and tools on my own, but I may still need to make adjustments during the hike. The result is that I am able to handle some challenges, but I might not feel fully prepared or confident in every situation.” ________________________________________ Level 3: Now think about a student who is feeling confident and capable. They’ve developed the skills to handle most situations and follow through on their plans. Previously we had: “Applies appropriate strategies and tools for safety, pacing, and environmental awareness effectively, demonstrating solid confidence and understanding.” Now answer, what do you mean? – what will this confidence and understanding look like? The student is able to follow through with their plans without feeling unsure or needing help. They complete the hike safely, keep a steady pace that works for them, and make choices that show they care about the environment, like staying on track and leaving no trace. Change it to first person: “I apply appropriate strategies and tools for safety, pacing, and environmental awareness effectively, demonstrating growing confidence and understanding. I notice that I can follow through with my plans without feeling unsure or needing help. I complete the hike safely, keep a steady pace that works for me, and make choices that show I care about the environment, like staying on track and leaving no trace.” ________________________________________ Level 4: Finally, picture a student who has mastered these skills. They are flexible, precise, and can handle anything that comes their way with ease. Previously we had: “Demonstrates expert application of varied strategies and tools with confidence, precision, and flexibility, fully addressing safety, pacing, and environmental awareness.” Now answer, what do you mean? – how will a student know they are an expert? The student recognizes that they can manage any situation on the hike with ease. They adjust their strategies seamlessly to fit different conditions, follow through on their plans without second-guessing, and make choices that not only ensure safety and pacing but also go above and beyond to show care for the environment and others. Change it to first person: “I demonstrate expert application of varied strategies and tools with confidence, precision, and flexibility, fully addressing safety, pacing, and environmental awareness. I recognize that I can manage any situation on the hike with ease. I adjust my strategies seamlessly to fit different conditions, follow through on my plans without second-guessing, and make choices that not only ensure safety and pacing but also go above and beyond to show care for the environment and others.” Let’s Break It Down: Creating “this means that” language can feel like a daunting task, especially if you’re new to teaching or trying to refine your criteria for the first time. So, where do you start? How did I create the “this means that”? How did I know what to write? First, begin by grounding yourself in the student experience. Imagine putting yourself in their shoes—yes, those slightly awkward and maybe-too-trendy shoes from elementary or high school. It might feel strange, given how long it’s been since we sat in their desks, but it’s worth the effort. Ask yourself, “How would I know I’ve met the level if I were them?” What would I see in my own work or feel about my progress? What would signal to me that I’ve achieved something? It’s an exercise in time travel, but it helps shift our thinking from what we, as teachers, expect to what students need to recognize about their success. By thinking this way, you can define outcomes in terms of what students might observe or experience to recognize their progress. This makes the language clearer and more actionable, ensuring students can connect their learning to the expectations in a meaningful way. Second, if you’re struggling to create “this means that” language or don’t feel confident in identifying what students need to see, here’s a structured process you can follow using AI tools: 1. Prompt AI with the standard and the criteria for the specific level you already have. Make sure your criteria provides a clear description of what students are expected to do. 2. Explain your goal clearly. Include in your prompt something like: “I need to create ‘this means that’ language to clarify this criteria. ‘This means that’ should bridge the gap between the criteria and what students can notice about their performance. It should define observable outcomes or results students would recognize at each level of proficiency. Avoid simply rephrasing the criteria—focus on what the student would notice to know they are meeting expectations.” Feel free to copy and paste this from the show notes directly into AI. 3. Coach the AI response. Sometimes the initial output rewords the criteria without addressing the student perspective. If this happens, don’t be afraid to tell AI it “got it wrong.” Refine your prompt by giving clear feedback, such as: “Consider what students need to see in their actions or outcomes that shows they’ve achieved this level. Focus on results they can recognize in their own learning.” By guiding the AI with specific instructions, you can steer it toward generating more meaningful output. Remember, the AI is a tool—it improves when you interact with it and provide better direction. 4. Add content pieces as needed. If your criteria involves specific foundational knowledge or context, provide that to the AI. Supplying this background helps the AI refine its responses and ensures the output reflects the learning objectives accurately. 5. Iterate and refine. The process isn’t magic, and it won’t be perfect on the first try. The AI can provide great starting points, but you’ll need to adapt and refine the language to align with your goals. This iterative process ensures the output is useful and actionable for both you and your students. 6. Collaborate with your department or colleagues. Once you’ve developed the “this means that” language, share it with others in your department or teaching team. Ask them to review it and provide feedback: Does it make sense? Is it clear and task-neutral? This extra set of eyes is invaluable for catching areas that might need adjustment and ensuring the language works for different perspectives. Collaboration not only improves the quality of the criteria but also builds your confidence in the process by reinforcing that you’re on the right track. By following these steps, you’re not just relying on the AI to figure it all out—you’re guiding the process to create clear, meaningful language that helps students understand and assess their own progress. Closing: This means that” bridges the gap between criteria and understanding by defining expectations in broader, task-neutral terms. It works alongside the criteria to provide clarity, helping students answer the natural question: “What do you mean?” This additional explanation shows students what success looks like and gives them a model for adding depth and detail to their work. Explicit language like “this means that” makes self-assessment more accurate and meaningful. Clear guidance helps students see where they are, understand why, and identify steps to improve. It also fosters metacognition—the ability to think about their own thinking—which builds independence, problem-solving skills, and adaptability. When students can recognize themselves in the criteria, they’re better equipped to take ownership of their learning and make intentional progress. ________________________________________ Now it’s your turn to embrace the clarity of “This means that…”! Add this language to your criteria to help students connect expectations to actions. Next week, we’ll wrap up the series with Episode 6: “If You Build It, They Will Grow,” where we’ll explore co-constructing criteria and teaching to the standard. *** Find out more about Shannon Schinkel: https://linktr.ee/ShannonSchinkel…